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September 24th, 2006, 06:01 PM
What do you guys think so far?
September 24th, 2006, 07:51 PM
The concept is interesting so far. I liked the beginning where you just broke in on a training session. Beginnings with action are always good :)
However, you're writing all of the dialogue in one paragraph when it should be a new paragraph starts each time a different person speaks. Otherwise it's confusing to read. Mistakes like that can really turn readers away no matter how excellent your writing may be. Best to fix that ;)
September 24th, 2006, 07:57 PM
Not bad so far, you can't go wrong with zombies.:cool:
Granted others may think it's stupid to bring such creatures into kaiju eiga or fan fiction, but I've always been openminded when it comes to such things seeing how I am notorious for it myself.
Looks like this could get good.
September 24th, 2006, 08:01 PM
Thanks Cyndi, but I always have done that, and no one ever said that before when I wrote my 6 previous G fics, but thanks for the tip.
Hey and thanks Mecha74, I wanted to do something in the vien of GFW's stew of influences so I threw in zombie films. The zombies though are just "side effect creatures" like how the meganura were for Megagilas.
Thanks for the comments, guys.:)
October 1st, 2006, 04:50 PM
I updated my story, any new thoughts?
October 8th, 2006, 03:10 PM
Behold Duradon!!!:P Its appearance has been revealed today.
November 12th, 2006, 05:11 PM
Big updates, what do you guys think?
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