Discuss Godzilla X Duradon here

[imposterzilla_exe]

What do you guys think so far?

[Cyndi]

The concept is interesting so far. I liked the beginning where you just broke in on a training session. Beginnings with action are always good :)

However, you're writing all of the dialogue in one paragraph when it should be a new paragraph starts each time a different person speaks. Otherwise it's confusing to read. Mistakes like that can really turn readers away no matter how excellent your writing may be. Best to fix that ;)

[Mecha74]

Not bad so far, you can't go wrong with zombies.:cool:

Granted others may think it's stupid to bring such creatures into kaiju eiga or fan fiction, but I've always been openminded when it comes to such things seeing how I am notorious for it myself.

Looks like this could get good.

[imposterzilla_exe]

Thanks Cyndi, but I always have done that, and no one ever said that before when I wrote my 6 previous G fics, but thanks for the tip.

Hey and thanks Mecha74, I wanted to do something in the vien of GFW's stew of influences so I threw in zombie films. The zombies though are just "side effect creatures" like how the meganura were for Megagilas.

Thanks for the comments, guys.:)

[imposterzilla_exe]

I updated my story, any new thoughts?

[imposterzilla_exe]

Behold Duradon!!!:P Its appearance has been revealed today.

[imposterzilla_exe]

Big updates, what do you guys think?