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ookami
May 31st, 2007, 10:18 PM
A fight amongst Countries
One not of our own
Lives are given
Soldiers fates sown
Deserted villages
Bloodstained hands
Forgotten treasures
Upon foriegn lands
America Fights
Freedom for others
Silent remorse
Our fallen brothers
Sent to fight
For Integrity
For others
As it may be
America Fights
Forever more
America fights
A tiresome war.

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This is one of three poems for my Creative Writing class that we had to do with a theme of something to do with America.
EternalMothra
May 31st, 2007, 10:27 PM
I so agree with what you are conveying in this. It is about the Iraq War, and how it has drug on for so long...*hugs*
ookami
June 22nd, 2007, 10:54 AM
Yes, it has been drug on for too long. We need to bring our troops home!
Kaiser Kronos
July 30th, 2007, 05:41 PM
I agree with the sentiment, but what happens afterward? :huh:
EternalMothra
August 5th, 2007, 11:38 PM
Idk if Sahra had anything else planned aftward in this poem.
Kaiser Kronos
August 6th, 2007, 01:45 PM
^I asked that about her statement that we need to bring the troops home. I meant what happens after we bring our boys home? What next?
EternalMothra
August 7th, 2007, 04:30 PM
OH!...well after that, we'll probably find some other country to storm into....seems very common with Bush's ideals. Lets hope our next president is not like that.
Kaiser Kronos
August 7th, 2007, 05:23 PM
^You kiddin'? Way things are goin' down, Bush'll be lucky to have his party re-elected, which in and of itself will require an act of god. (Provided the god is Allah, that is.):look:
EternalMothra
August 8th, 2007, 11:25 AM
LMFAO that is true. Lets hope the democrats prove to be more efficient and logical in what they do.