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EternalMothra
June 11th, 2007, 03:55 PM
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b19/EternalMothra/Donny007.jpg


I took this picture the otherday, of the sun setting during a thunderstorm, it was so beautiful. And I wrote a poem to go with it, that kinda gives a hint of my hopeless romantic side lol:

The rain is warm and sweet
I pace through the spring grass,
Feeling the embrace of nature around me
The thunder echoes in the distance,
How I wish I could be with somebody,
Enjoying the peaceful moment….

As I walk, I close my eyes
Your face is in my clairvoyant gaze
All the worldly stress dies
And turns into a blanket of haze.
Mother Nature’s beauty
Fills me with the hope of being with you
It is my duty,
To continue going on for you….

Beyond the dark horizon
The sun sets, peering through the clouds
It reminds me of the bright future,
The hopeful daily star,
Retreats to rest as the night dawns
The dusk life finally begins to spawn….

Upon the water’s surface,
I do not see my reflection,
Your face is there, smiling back at me
I sit in the wet grass,
Imagining a day when I’ll feel whole…
It seem so close…
Just a reflection upon the water away…

Cyndi
June 11th, 2007, 05:30 PM
What an awesome picture and that poem is so heartfelt :)

EternalMothra
June 11th, 2007, 05:50 PM
Aww thx Cyndi *hugs* :)

ookami
June 22nd, 2007, 11:07 AM
I love this poem. Its so well written and it is very cute.

EternalMothra
June 22nd, 2007, 11:26 AM
Thanx, I love how the pictures kinda convey what I feel.

ookami
June 22nd, 2007, 11:27 AM
Yes, that is a very clever idea! Perhaps I shall do something like that... *ponders*

EternalMothra
June 22nd, 2007, 11:39 AM
You should! Or maybe you can draw something and write a poem about it. :)