SpaceHunterM
December 16th, 2004, 08:23 PM
So far I have only a final draft for part one of the series, but I'd appreciate any feedback you can give me on it. This takes place in the same parallel universe in which Tomzilla's MWF is located so you might not be familar with the main character Cygan, but that isn't really important yet. If someone asks though I will post his backround and statistics. Enjoy!
The space hunter cronicles
Cygan and Gigan both stood in a underground room beneath the MWF arenas that the cyborgs had claimed and remodeled as their own. Everything was silent except for the hum from the screen in the front of the room.
"what is that?" Gigan questioned the tall cyborg next to him. Cygan only smirked and turned towards the door. "what the heck is it Cygan you were in Nebula M Spacehunter longer than i was, you obviously know its another version of ME so I've a right to know," he questioned again.
Still smirking as much as his beak would allow Cygan said " I''m just going to welcome mom to earth" Gigan immensly confused and a bit worried by this last quote turned back to the monitor.
Cygan exiting the room was quickly encountered by his ally Frostflare who asked "Cygan I sense something is troubling you my ally what clouds your thoughts with... FEAR? Cygan we have known each other for months and I know from a fact you fear no known monster what is it that makes you tremble."
"I am NOT trembling" Cy said "but, your right there is a threat to me and my predesscor that I have to deal with I am grateful for your concern, but this is not only none of your bussiness and we both know nothing can defeat the might of the black Gigan" and with a cackle he flew off into space frostflare stood there then with a shrug returned to what he was doing.
In an area slightly beyond pluto an entity travles to earth. "Mission status: Primary objective: capture of Cygan in progress, Secondary objective: capture of gigan in progress. Subject status: Located on earth seemingly unharmed. When mission is complete will return to home base in SpaceHunter M Nebula.
Even deeper in space in the very heart of Spacehunter M, on a lone starship the mysterious entities message was received. " Supreme overlord sir, I've just recieved a message from project 4" a communication officer called out.
"WHAT how can that be it flew into a black hole and was lost ensign double check this" The overlord bellowed"
"already have sir there no mistaking it except"
"except WHAT"
"except sir that our reading tell us it's power is twice as strong as it was when it last reported." The supreme overlord sat down in disbelief and with a a shaky voive said "contact deep space core Omega tell them to send all they have to where the message's origin is."
Plz give some feedback
The space hunter cronicles
Cygan and Gigan both stood in a underground room beneath the MWF arenas that the cyborgs had claimed and remodeled as their own. Everything was silent except for the hum from the screen in the front of the room.
"what is that?" Gigan questioned the tall cyborg next to him. Cygan only smirked and turned towards the door. "what the heck is it Cygan you were in Nebula M Spacehunter longer than i was, you obviously know its another version of ME so I've a right to know," he questioned again.
Still smirking as much as his beak would allow Cygan said " I''m just going to welcome mom to earth" Gigan immensly confused and a bit worried by this last quote turned back to the monitor.
Cygan exiting the room was quickly encountered by his ally Frostflare who asked "Cygan I sense something is troubling you my ally what clouds your thoughts with... FEAR? Cygan we have known each other for months and I know from a fact you fear no known monster what is it that makes you tremble."
"I am NOT trembling" Cy said "but, your right there is a threat to me and my predesscor that I have to deal with I am grateful for your concern, but this is not only none of your bussiness and we both know nothing can defeat the might of the black Gigan" and with a cackle he flew off into space frostflare stood there then with a shrug returned to what he was doing.
In an area slightly beyond pluto an entity travles to earth. "Mission status: Primary objective: capture of Cygan in progress, Secondary objective: capture of gigan in progress. Subject status: Located on earth seemingly unharmed. When mission is complete will return to home base in SpaceHunter M Nebula.
Even deeper in space in the very heart of Spacehunter M, on a lone starship the mysterious entities message was received. " Supreme overlord sir, I've just recieved a message from project 4" a communication officer called out.
"WHAT how can that be it flew into a black hole and was lost ensign double check this" The overlord bellowed"
"already have sir there no mistaking it except"
"except WHAT"
"except sir that our reading tell us it's power is twice as strong as it was when it last reported." The supreme overlord sat down in disbelief and with a a shaky voive said "contact deep space core Omega tell them to send all they have to where the message's origin is."
Plz give some feedback